After looking at the full project all the way through i have come up with a few things that need changing.
I think there are too many times that i am on camera as well as some of them being too long. I have decided, after doing more reseacrh on BBC documentaries, seen that i am on the right track, however i have chosen to do an introduction to the presenter as well as a title screen. I have also decided to have the words of the media expert when i am giving his statement. I will have to do a bit more filming, as well as maybe a case study of a violent game just to break up the time i am on the screen.
I think there are too many times that i am on camera as well as some of them being too long. I have decided, after doing more reseacrh on BBC documentaries, seen that i am on the right track, however i have chosen to do an introduction to the presenter as well as a title screen. I have also decided to have the words of the media expert when i am giving his statement. I will have to do a bit more filming, as well as maybe a case study of a violent game just to break up the time i am on the screen.
