Jacob Middleton -
"Fantastico! but some of the shots at the start of the video are a little bit boring, when he's just stood singing. You could liven up the shot with an effect or something. Other than that I love it, well done =)"
We agreed with his comments and took his advise, we changed the lighting in these shots to make them more interesting and appealing to the eye. We have included a short video to show how we did this.
Natalie King -
"My favourite shots are the faster paced ones, I really like how you have Incorporated the fairytale book into the story and the animated drawing effect looks really good. The opening sequence with the children is great, it adds more to the story. You could maybe put some of these scenes in the video towards the end to connect them to the older characters"
We also took this advice as it makes sense and when we moved some clips we found it fit very well. The children now walk away towards the end of the song. Indicating that the characters are meant to be together and there is a happy ending.
Max Mayer -
"This is really good, good work guys :) I love the violin shots they fit so well with the song. The concept fits really well with the lyrics"