The strengths of the video as it stands is the band footage, we had a great opportunity to get some really good footage and did this with exceptional quality. Also the editing is coming along nicely, however the cuts need to be faster and the narrative needs some work.
I think the group should change the pace of the move to each clip so it is fast moving as this would reflect the fast pace music also. I think that we should also change some of the editing so the band footage is equal to the narrative footage, as I feel that some of the band clips at the moment are too long.
The group have yet to finish the narrative and do some more editing of the footage we already have.
Alex