Here is the rough cut for our music video.
General feedback from people in our class:
*The beginning studio shot seems a bit long.
*The shadow at the beginning does not seem to fit or really make sense.
*Alot of the audience didn't completely understand what was going on.
*Didn't like the box fade, seemed a bit cheesy and didn't fit.
*The flashback in the park wasn't clear that it was a flashback.
*Good fades and editing.
*Studio shots show powerful emotion.
*Timing of actions and lyrics work well together. Also, music is well matched up to the film.