Jayde Markland -
Jayde believed that the editing was well worked and placed together for the parts that we had already created. She particularly liked the shots and edits within in the cafe for our first chorus and believed they worked well within the piece. She also liked the handheld shots of Hannah within the hospital car park - for both the camera work and the editing used to make it appear as a home video.
Due to the fact that the video has not yet been completed, she thought that the home video shots appeared to be random and not seem to make any sense when looking at the video from a narrative point of view. She has told us that once the rest of the video has been included that it will begin to make sense and can be followed easily and effectively.