Rachel Unsworth -
"When you're singing with the guitar I think you need a close up of you singing or more camera movements in that bit like a medium shot. When Hannah is singing the lyrics, it could be much clearer what she is saying. I would have thought it could either be re-filmed or replaced with another kind of video.
I really like the home video within the car and the close up of the guitar as one of the opening shots. The editing in the scene in Ben's room also works well moving from him playing guitar, to the phone, and back again."
"When you're singing with the guitar I think you need a close up of you singing or more camera movements in that bit like a medium shot. When Hannah is singing the lyrics, it could be much clearer what she is saying. I would have thought it could either be re-filmed or replaced with another kind of video.
I really like the home video within the car and the close up of the guitar as one of the opening shots. The editing in the scene in Ben's room also works well moving from him playing guitar, to the phone, and back again."