'Lola Spencer- Merry Happy'
To improve our video we have asked a few of our classmates for their opinion on the effectiveness of our video, the positive aspects and also for some constructive criticism where necessary...
Levi likes -
- our use of stop motion
- the timing of the miming
- the storyline
Levi suggested there was to many repeated shots.
Danielle likes-
- our opening and editing between piano shots
- the continuity of the fast walking shot.
Danielle suggested including more extreme close ups.
Sam likes-
- The start
- the introduction and conclusion of the storyline
- the fast editing
Sam suggested including more variation in shots towards the end of our video.
We also questioned our teacher, he appreciated our use of black and white to indicate the flashbacks that provide our storyline.
We are now planning on addressing the criticisms. We already have extreme close ups filmed, so we will include them in our video. Regarding repeated shots we will now search through our filming to find others or if possible film some other scenarios. However we don't want to compromise our video by including irrelevant shots.