Feedback of our film so far and adressing feedback ...

Emma Meadows, Daryl Bradbury, Emily Caine, Laura Jones
'Lola Spencer- Merry Happy'

One of the criticisms of our video was the lack of 'extreme close up' shots. To ammend this we have browsed our filming so far and discovered to examples of this shot,

Our issue with including these is that another of our criticism is a lack of varied scenarios for our singer.Therefore we have decided to film laura once more, capturing an extreme close up. Once this has been done we will find a place in our video for the shot.