On youtube i found the begining of a full documentary on game violence, so it gives me a good idea of what the finsihed product could look like. It is part one of four so it is a lot longer then i need but is still useful.
There are a few problems that i see with this that i aium to change in mine. Most of the docmentary is very wordy and spends alot of time with one person infront of camera just talking. Also the presenter does not catch me and keep me watching. These all make it slow and abit boring, but i do understand that it is only the begining and so may get better as it goes on. The positives are that it gives a lot of time to the games and keeps the game in the background of the person talking. It does not however show other violent games that are more violent then the ones shown, but i that can be easily changed and improved on. This therefore is a good template for my documentary but it needs to be impreved on.